Drowning in the sea of solitude,
lost on the plains of wild and simple thoughts.
Left with the scarf of the beautiful memories,
the fragrance so appealing to my lost soul;
still as every other time I plugged my nose to smell you.
I miss the sweet pain; all of it,
from the torture of your presence in total absence,
to the liberation brought by the tour of your dagger through my heart.
Though our principles may never let us see our true selves in the mirror,
close your eyes and ask if I truly do not miss you.
I rue the miles
and the wrapped darkness it gifted us.
You’d have seen through all looking into these eyes you once loved.
My simple words couldn’t explain the complications no more.
Maybe you just needed to know far from you was never my home; with you was.
Now I crush on the beauty I once had,
one that was gonna be mine through all.
Maybe that day still would have come,
even if I was close enough to wrap my arms around you.
Though a simple hush could have saved the day;
giving it to a long kiss and a few tears of hope.
I still miss you though,
even if a flood of tears can’t drench the desert our own garden has become.
Just didn’t need to lose you to know you’ve been my best yet.
Known that from the first use of “5” on day one.
Until there is a truly perfect one,
there’ll be none closer to perfection than you; for me at least.
Wow oooòoo….so touching
Awwwww…. This is mind blowing. I shed tears when I read this.
“Far from you was never my home; with you was” if only those we love could see this…
What a well-worded powerful piece!!!
highly articulated introvertive genius.
Impressive…wot a dae, jux what a needed @ moment. Though our principles may never let us see our real selves in the mirror, close your eyes and ask if I truly do not miss you FHA!…..no be lie buddy.. Plz really nid more of dis lmao.
This is a Wow. This is indeed incredible.
Truly touching
Brought back some memories
Dehm lovely
To be honest , I got confused poems are so touchy and sweet thanks for making me read dis maybe you write one about me soon
Wow……..this really touching
I love this
This is so emotional … ” just didn’t need to loose you to know you’ve been my best yet” Great art, deep.
You really flipped through the pages of your heart this time…
Keep up the good work
Nice one……..
This is lovely, nice piece
What a powerful & well -worded piece!!!
Samuel has always been an introvertive genius lurking around the corners of the earth.
The gods ain’t to be blamed for the high-wired brains you got.
Touche…….. shall we together pat our faces and clean our tears as we meditate on what we just read
Hmm. Well articulated syntax. Nice write up .
Hmmmm…. Now I crush on the beauty I once had. Nice one
“Maybe you just needed to know far from you was never my home; with you was”
That was very deep. Cheers man!!!
Emotional it is,I love it
I love it because it’s heart touching.nice one
This is PLP (Punch Lines Poem)
Good job there, lad. Right in the feels.
Nice one Sam…
Emotionally prodding and stirring.
Dude, tellme you’re not depressed
Wow…….
Awesomely touching…… Those of us not interested in love must make a U turn and confess that love is indeed a beautiful thing!
You gat me there bro……